I would like to take a moment to point to the most recent short posted, and kindly suggest that my reader guide their discerning eye to my first post to compare the two. In only eleven posts, I feel, and my colleague agrees, that I have made a considerable amount of progress. Needless to say I am pleased, though I will anyway. I am pleased.
Too bad for Megan, she started this project as an impressive and solid writer, so she doesn't get the benefit of such a dramatic change. It's hard to pity her for that.
Anyway, if you read this, thank you for visitting. I hope that you enjoy what we have created thusfar, and hope you will continue to return.
If you are not reading this, well then... I have nothing to say to you.
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You flatter me.
I can see my own improvement, too, though I'm still too verbose and hung up on developing original figurative language. Character development is a big one. So is dialogue.
We'll get there. Don't worry.
Bravo. I just do not want to read "thusly."
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